Wednesday, February 17, 2010

Our first Essay

03/02/10
Today, I have finally written the first essay. The essay is about the story of Flowers For Algernon(FFA). We needed to apply the PEE which was stated in the previous blog post. Writing the essay was quite tough and i needed help from Mr Teo sometimes. Some time later, Mr Teo gave us back our essay. He gave us lots of comments and how we could improve on our essays. I am intending to rewrite my essay and have done so. I got a C+ for this essay. We also paired up with our buddy beforehand and gave each others comments on the essay. This lesson was very interesting as it has taught me on how to write an essay in the right way and it also prepared us for the future essays.

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