It was a cooling and windy evening. The Sun was just setting and it gave the sky a cast of bright orange light. I was enjoying the wonderful sunset as well as the cooling wind. I could feel the wind blowing strongly against my face, and it felt cooling and refreshing at the same time. The coconut trees rustled their fronds wildly, as if the fronds were about to fly off with the wind. The sand on the beach was light brown in colour, but had turned slightly orange due to the orange rays of the setting Sun. The waves too were moving in unison, and splashing against the shore, as if the wind was pushing them. The soft splash of the waves created a soothing atmosphere. The colour of the waves seemed brightened up as they reflected the orange rays of the Sun. There were houses nearby, near the beach, and they were brown in colour, as if trying to match the colour of the sand on the beach. The scenery of the beach was breathtaking and enjoyable.
~Gordon (:
Try to use more sensory details - hearing.
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